Would somebody be willing to verify/correct this little somethin

So, I'm fiddling with an Idea - and in the process I found myself overwhelmed by the amount of Information provided here in regards to the inner workings of the Dragon Language. I figured I could try my best, using just the Translator Tools, to give it a go, "brute force"-style.

However, I think that can only get one so far .. since I don't have the time to delve into the depths of it all, I figured I might try my luck in finding somebody more adept in the Dragon Language to verify and correct this for me :) 

Here goes the brute force attempt: 

Zu'u Los Fin Spaan Do Dii Fahdonne = I am the Shield of my Companions
Frin Wah Ofan Pah Do Zu'u Fah Niin = Eager to give all of me for them
Kreh Ni Krent = Bent, not broken
Ahraan Ni Viik = Wounded, not defeated
Sindugahvon Ulse = Unyielding for Eternity 

After this part is verified, I'd like to convert it into the runes - I assume that process is a little more straight-forward than the english-to-dragon translation, but would appreciate pointer's in the use of the provided tools (alphabet / transcriber) , aswell.

Kind regards, eagerly awaiting any input on the matter.

Anataron

Category: Translation