Correct translation

Hello everyone im new to Dovahzul and im just trying to translate a few song lyrics would you mind telling me if i did it correctly and if not can you correct me?

Zu'u fen ni kos qahnaar fin sul los dii

I will not be denied this day is mine

Thank you in advance

Z5 FEN NI KOS Q4N1R
FIN SUL LOS D3

 

Category: Translation