Hey, this is where you can write your translations, I'll look them over when I can, any questions put them here also!

Song of the Askelde Men

I got the chance to do some translating tonight, and hopefully will have more time tomorrow to do more! However I have he first seven lines (ernding with "Where men...life away") sort of ready. The lines are missing some words. Here's what I got:

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________

This is only the very beginning of my first draft. As you can see, I'm missing the words:

• Fifty
• sky-flung
• though
• went
• wink
• vale
• whence
• came
• pale
• flame

I'm sorry, this post is a bit excessive.

katgirl22k

I got the chance to do some translating tonight, and hopefully will have more time tomorrow to do more! However I have he first seven lines (ernding with "Where men...life away") sort of ready. The lines are missing some words. Here's what I got:

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VULONNE NOL HOFK3N Z5 L1U PR1D

 

 

VOKNAU 1N

________

KO HJ1LMARCH GEVILD

 

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D3 SLEN LOST D7 4RK S1RK W4

 

________

D3 H4NUH2M

_________

NAU, NOL KOPR1N ST1FNAU

 

________

VON TIL KO F1L

________ _________

5

______

 

 

D1RR DILON MUN KOR1V

________ _______

 

 

V9N MUZ F1L OSOS WO KUN L1S HOND

 

This is only the very beginning of my first draft. As you can see, I'm missing the words:

• Fifty
• sky-flung
• though
• went
• wink
• vale
• whence
• came
• pale
• flame

I'm sorry, this post is a bit excessive.

• http://thuum.org/lesson6.php For numbers! This will help.
• Went is the past tense of Go.
• Sky-flung could be worded as "thrown to the sky".
• Came is the past tense of Come.

A hint, though, don't go for a word for word translation, try to be more poetic and think outside the box! Other than that it does look good so far, I would like a roman script version too if it isn't too much trouble- it's easier for me to pick out mistakes and things.

Other than that, good good!

ASTORKiT

katgirl22k

I got the chance to do some translating tonight, and hopefully will have more time tomorrow to do more! However I have he first seven lines (ernding with "Where men...life away") sort of ready. The lines are missing some words. Here's what I got:

________

VULONNE NOL HOFK3N Z5 L1U PR1D

 

 

VOKNAU 1N

________

KO HJ1LMARCH GEVILD

 

_______

D3 SLEN LOST D7 4RK S1RK W4

 

________

D3 H4NUH2M

_________

NAU, NOL KOPR1N ST1FNAU

 

________

VON TIL KO F1L

________ _________

5

______

 

 

D1RR DILON MUN KOR1V

________ _______

 

 

V9N MUZ F1L OSOS WO KUN L1S HOND

 

This is only the very beginning of my first draft. As you can see, I'm missing the words:

• Fifty
• sky-flung
• though
• went
• wink
• vale
• whence
• came
• pale
• flame

I'm sorry, this post is a bit excessive.

• http://thuum.org/lesson6.php For numbers! This will help.
• Went is the past tense of Go.
• Sky-flung could be worded as "thrown to the sky".
• Came is the past tense of Come.

A hint, though, don't go for a word for word translation, try to be more poetic and think outside the box! Other than that it does look good so far, I would like a roman script version too if it isn't too much trouble- it's easier for me to pick out mistakes and things.

Other than that, good good!

Alright! Those tips are sure to help. Next time I post, I can definitly provide a roman script.