My apologies for the previous thread bugging out, continue to share your writing here!

This is my first shot at translating anything, tell me how I did! (Original: http://maxilyrics.com/gare-du-nord-poem-rouge-lyrics-7274.html)

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Zu'u meyz nol nistaad
Ahrk inaak wah nistaad
Zu'u los riin ko briin do tiid
Zu'u dreh agos, Zu'u brot
Ahrk gah Zu'u dreh ni
Zu'u tovit nid
Ahrk Zu'u siiv..
Nid zuk uv son
Fein lor, hahnu, kru'um
Zu'u qiid hi...
Fos vah do dii krahl?
Dahrin fah dii sahlos
Vir vis Zu'u bo dopur?
Vir dreh Zu'u bo nau?
Stin nol lahbriin, grohiik ahrk paal
Zu'u dreh ni laan daar
Zu'u nunon laan wah kos stin
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I just created my own poem in english and im corrently translating it to dovahzul

so here is the english version:

The tale of the dragonborn

The powerfull dragonborn
The hero of the people
Not only a world saver
But also a dragon killer

He started unknown
until he kill a dragon
to be known as dragonborn
and the saver of whiterun

With a human body
But dragon blod in his veins
He found his destiny
to be full of pain

The world eter was back
To destroy the world
And the only one in his way
was the courageus dragonborn

The hero found the scroll
With the strongest of the powers
The legendary Elder Scroll
The biggest known power

With that legendary power
He visited the land of the dead
A suposed paradise
cursed with mist

With the battle to begin
Dead and live where together
Present and past's dragonborns
Go toguether to the battle

With legendary shouts
They cleared the mist
The were ready to the battle
To fulfill their destiny

The four dragon slayers
Finaly won the battle
But something went wrong
And dragon's sould was still alive

But for now it was a triumph
And he was back to his world
Being known as a hero
And skyrim and all Tamriel

But alduin was not defeated
His sould was still alive
But for now he desapeard
And we can live unwarried

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Its quite big so it will take some time

So ill post it when i finish it

Very good, Iguana!  Everything is very grammatically sound, and it flows well.  My only comment is that "zu'u" isnt' capitalized like "I" is in English, but that's fairly minor.

paarthurnax

Very good, Iguana!  Everything is very grammatically sound, and it flows well.  My only comment is that "zu'u" isnt' capitalized like "I" is in English, but that's fairly minor.

Thanks! I'll remember that. 

Well, here you have my poem translated to Dovahzul (my first poem YEY)

Translation of a dialogue/speech (I really wanted to see what this would sound like in Dovahzul):

I translated a few paragraphs of the first chapter in "A Game of Thrones".  Here's what I came up with.  It might be fun to translate back and compare to the original text:

Bran

Veyl vuaan laar ahrk krah, voth faurah tol prodah oblaan do koor.  Nust zor ahst diist haan, zein men pah, wah koraav aan mun voklovaan.  Bran zor benex must, valk voth sotiivend.  Daar diist tiid rok kosaan nedaan bokse ganog wah shur voth drog bormahii ahrk zeymahhel wah koraav zeydaansejun kos drehaan.  Nii lost niint raa do koor, ahrk  zost do laas do Bran.

Mun kosaan kunaan wah hofkah ko ahrolle.  Robb lor rost Volgin, zahkriil vahrin wah Mans Reyder, Jun-On-Faal-Vund.  Lor verolg Bran.  Rok dahmaan riest teyye Woth Nun gesaag must.  Volginne lost munax muz, rek saag, aariikke ahrk kriidde ahrk tafiirre.  Nust rad voth hjotte ahrk gaaffe, gahrot kon kiir ko vedaak do vulon, ahrk piin sos nol zahkke.

Wunduniikke feyn Nol fin sifahliil ahrk qethgaaf dil amol, wah fin undoriikke dil krosis, dinok saraan must dil dil amol. From the falmer and Draigr deep below, to the adventurersdeep sorrow, death awaits them deep, deep below. ^A little verse that came to mind...^

(You) Can not remake (the) past...so look ahead or risk getting left behind.

- Vala Mal Doran, Stargate Franchise