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Kosenu's poetry thread

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Kosenu
December 21, 2014

Drem yol lok! Welcome to my poetry thread. I'll keep this introduction short and sweet: I'm Kosenu, I write poems every now and then, and this is where I'll post 'em. Enjoy! If you'd like to, feel free to join in.

Another little note: I think poems are made to read out loud, and recommend you to do so as well, instead of just translating the thing. Metric schemes are hard, so it's nice when they get noticed. Nox!

 


A haiku to get the thread started:
 

Dovah, bo med ven
Bo med fod fin lein lost kiin
Us faal al los het
by Kosenu
December 21, 2014

Drem yol lok! Welcome to my poetry thread. I'll keep this introduction short and sweet: I'm Kosenu, I write poems every now and then, and this is where I'll post 'em. Enjoy! If you'd like to, feel free to join in.

Another little note: I think poems are made to read out loud, and recommend you to do so as well, instead of just translating the thing. Metric schemes are hard, so it's nice when they get noticed. Nox!

 


A haiku to get the thread started:
 

Dovah, bo med ven
Bo med fod fin lein lost kiin
Us faal al los het

Kosenu
December 21, 2014

 

Hi botaas, fahdon
Nuz fod dii laan fah hi daal
Fen hi meyz wah zey?
by Kosenu
December 21, 2014

 

Hi botaas, fahdon
Nuz fod dii laan fah hi daal
Fen hi meyz wah zey?

Kosenu
December 21, 2014
2:15 am. I wrote some sort of pantoum-like thingy. Enjoy my insomnia.




Zu'u vomindok.

Zu'u nau strunmah,

Zu'u koraav fin jul.

Vomindok fos laan.

Zu'u nau strunmah,

Dii nah los lot;

Vomindok fos laan.

Ahrk fos nii los fah?

Dii nah los lot.

Nid pruzah mulhaan het,

Ahrk fos nii los fah?

Zu'u ful tiiraaz nu,

Nid pruzah mulhaan het.

Nust krif ahrk krif,

Ahrk zu'u los tiiraaz.

Zu'u laan bo nol het,

Nust krif, ahrk krif.

Zu'u koraav fin jul,

ahrk laan bo nol het:

Zu'u vomindok fah nu.

by Kosenu
December 21, 2014
2:15 am. I wrote some sort of pantoum-like thingy. Enjoy my insomnia.







Zu'u vomindok.


Zu'u nau strunmah,


Zu'u koraav fin jul.


Vomindok fos laan.


Zu'u nau strunmah,


Dii nah los lot;


Vomindok fos laan.


Ahrk fos nii los fah?


Dii nah los lot.


Nid pruzah mulhaan het,


Ahrk fos nii los fah?


Zu'u ful tiiraaz nu,


Nid pruzah mulhaan het.


Nust krif ahrk krif,


Ahrk zu'u los tiiraaz.


Zu'u laan bo nol het,


Nust krif, ahrk krif.


Zu'u koraav fin jul,


ahrk laan bo nol het:


Zu'u vomindok fah nu.




Foduiiz
December 21, 2014

Here's something I came up with

Frin yol ag kosil
Rul bein dovah mah
Fah un zun fen koraav
Tol mu krif voth un bah

by Foduiiz
December 21, 2014

Here's something I came up with

Frin yol ag kosil
Rul bein dovah mah
Fah un zun fen koraav
Tol mu krif voth un bah


Foduiiz
December 22, 2014

I re-read the title, don't know if it's my place to post on "Kosenu's poetry thread" :/

I'll repost this on another thread if I find one

by Foduiiz
December 22, 2014

I re-read the title, don't know if it's my place to post on "Kosenu's poetry thread" :/

I'll repost this on another thread if I find one


Kosenu
December 22, 2014
Foduiiz

I re-read the title, don't know if it's my place to post on "Kosenu's poetry thread" :/

I'll repost this on another thread if I find one


No worries man, feel free to join in. The more the merrier!

 

EDIT: edited the first post to say so :)

by Kosenu
December 22, 2014
Foduiiz

I re-read the title, don't know if it's my place to post on "Kosenu's poetry thread" :/

I'll repost this on another thread if I find one


No worries man, feel free to join in. The more the merrier!

 

EDIT: edited the first post to say so :)


Kosenu
December 22, 2014

Alright, I wasn't planning on actually posting this one, since it's, well, dark, but hey, I changed my mind. Here's a Yadu, don't sue me:

"Wen dok los nii?"
Nii lost dii ni:
Zahkrii kinzon.
Med vulon mah,
sahqon klov drey.


A Yadu is a poem with a rhyme scheme looking a bit like stairs. I use a fairly commonly used one here:

- - - A
- - A -
- A - B
- - B -
- B - -
by Kosenu
December 22, 2014

Alright, I wasn't planning on actually posting this one, since it's, well, dark, but hey, I changed my mind. Here's a Yadu, don't sue me:

"Wen dok los nii?"
Nii lost dii ni:
Zahkrii kinzon.
Med vulon mah,
sahqon klov drey.


A Yadu is a poem with a rhyme scheme looking a bit like stairs. I use a fairly commonly used one here:

- - - A
- - A -
- A - B
- - B -
- B - -

Kosenu
December 23, 2014

Okay, I made a poem. But one with a twist. Whoever finds out what's shifty about this one gets to request a subject, so have a good look. One hint: it is something related to the Dragon Language, and not to poetry (meaning rhyme schemes, amount of syllables, etc. etc. etc.).

Fodiiz ko luft,
ahrk ven ko om.
Gut nol hofkiin,
het ko fin krah brom.

Fos dreh laan het?
Fos lost nii fah?
Fos fen ahst laat,
drun oblaan wah yah?
by Kosenu
December 23, 2014

Okay, I made a poem. But one with a twist. Whoever finds out what's shifty about this one gets to request a subject, so have a good look. One hint: it is something related to the Dragon Language, and not to poetry (meaning rhyme schemes, amount of syllables, etc. etc. etc.).

Fodiiz ko luft,
ahrk ven ko om.
Gut nol hofkiin,
het ko fin krah brom.

Fos dreh laan het?
Fos lost nii fah?
Fos fen ahst laat,
drun oblaan wah yah?

Kosenu
December 27, 2014
Kosenu

Okay, I made a poem. But one with a twist. Whoever finds out what's shifty about this one gets to request a subject, so have a good look. One hint: it is something related to the Dragon Language, and not to poetry (meaning rhyme schemes, amount of syllables, etc. etc. etc.).

Fodiiz ko luft,
ahrk ven ko om.
Gut nol hofkiin,
het ko fin krah brom.

Fos dreh laan het?
Fos lost nii fah?
Fos fen ahst laat,
drun oblaan wah yah?

Okay, since no one seems to be able to find it out, I'll tell y'all: no subject is specified. You could read it as a poem about someone wondering about what he is doing, a plea from one friend to the other to get back to reality (asking him to wonder what he's doing, if you will), or someone talking/thinking about a 'he' or 'she' who is completely lost. I thought it would be more obvious than it apparently is, but then again, I suppose I can't judge that since I've written it. Thanks for your attempts over at the wall, guys and gals.

by Kosenu
December 27, 2014
Kosenu

Okay, I made a poem. But one with a twist. Whoever finds out what's shifty about this one gets to request a subject, so have a good look. One hint: it is something related to the Dragon Language, and not to poetry (meaning rhyme schemes, amount of syllables, etc. etc. etc.).

Fodiiz ko luft,
ahrk ven ko om.
Gut nol hofkiin,
het ko fin krah brom.

Fos dreh laan het?
Fos lost nii fah?
Fos fen ahst laat,
drun oblaan wah yah?

Okay, since no one seems to be able to find it out, I'll tell y'all: no subject is specified. You could read it as a poem about someone wondering about what he is doing, a plea from one friend to the other to get back to reality (asking him to wonder what he's doing, if you will), or someone talking/thinking about a 'he' or 'she' who is completely lost. I thought it would be more obvious than it apparently is, but then again, I suppose I can't judge that since I've written it. Thanks for your attempts over at the wall, guys and gals.


Kosenu
January 9, 2015

Gather round kids, and have some spoilers for A Blade Of Words:

Zu'u mindok hi mindok,
zu'u kinbok do zok.
Zu'u mindok hi mindok,
tol nust los nuz dok.
Hi mindok, hi mindok,
hi mindok faasi.
Ahrk tol faas, dii lot faas,
tol lot faas los hi.
by Kosenu
January 9, 2015

Gather round kids, and have some spoilers for A Blade Of Words:

Zu'u mindok hi mindok,
zu'u kinbok do zok.
Zu'u mindok hi mindok,
tol nust los nuz dok.
Hi mindok, hi mindok,
hi mindok faasi.
Ahrk tol faas, dii lot faas,
tol lot faas los hi.

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