Worui'in

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And be sure to give me ideas. Thanks, and I hope you like it!

Orcs being former High Elves while Goblins were Wood Elves?

Awesome idea! Thank you! While ideas are great, what did I do wrong?

Hmm I would recommend perhaps comming up with different names for the elven races? Like how TES uses Altmer, Bosmer, Dunmer, etc.

That would require me to create a language. I do know a few people who have created multiple languages, so I can make that work.

r/conlangs will be your best friend for that one.

I think you should make an RP on this :)

Good idea! Maybe after some ideas.

Veyd Sahvoz

I think you should make an RP on this :)

I'm not even CLOSE to completing the universe. Don't expect a thread on it anytime soon.

How about you base one of the wood elf tribes on the family from the Scotish legend "Sawney Bean". You could add kelpies (not the statue, the creature it's based on) to the legendary beasts, basicly they are shape-shifting water spirits that usually take the form of horses. they would try to lure humans into the water and drown them.

that sounds alot like the mermaids from the last movie of Pirates of the Caribbean (tell me if I spelled it right)

@Veyd Actually it is the other way around. Kelpies came WAY before.

Veyd Sahvoz

that sounds alot like the mermaids from the last movie of Pirates of the Caribbean (tell me if I spelled it right)

yeah, they are similar (the only difference i can think of off the top of my head would be mermaids are found in oceans and kelpies are found in various lochs in scotland), but mermaids are really overused in fantasy universes when compared most scottish mythical creatures. it's better to do something rarely used that is similar to something common, than to do something that has been done a million times over.

Oh, nvm then