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The Lord's Prayer

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Ruvgein
September 9, 2016

(this is a work in progress, as I learn more of the language this will be edited.)

 

bormahu, wo los ko Faal Lok,
revak kos hin faan.
Hin junaar bo,
hin jah kos dreh
nau gol ol nii los ko Faal Lok.
Ofan mu daar sul un brotsesul,
Ahrk frolaaz mu un vosod,
ol mu frolaaz niin tol vosod wah mu.
ahrk aak mii ni kotin sahrelend,
nuz kelnat mii nol vokul.

Fulniilos.

 

(only comment on the words and better ones to use, don't be a jerk, please.)

by Ruvgein
September 9, 2016

(this is a work in progress, as I learn more of the language this will be edited.)

 

bormahu, wo los ko Faal Lok,
revak kos hin faan.
Hin junaar bo,
hin jah kos dreh
nau gol ol nii los ko Faal Lok.
Ofan mu daar sul un brotsesul,
Ahrk frolaaz mu un vosod,
ol mu frolaaz niin tol vosod wah mu.
ahrk aak mii ni kotin sahrelend,
nuz kelnat mii nol vokul.

Fulniilos.

 

(only comment on the words and better ones to use, don't be a jerk, please.)


Pahvomedrah
September 9, 2016

Well done, which translation did you use?

by Pahvomedrah
September 9, 2016

Well done, which translation did you use?


Ruvgein
September 9, 2016

Thank you! Because it's Dovahzul I mixed in a few versions of the prayer to get the right sound.  But it was mostly the ESV version.

by Ruvgein
September 9, 2016

Thank you! Because it's Dovahzul I mixed in a few versions of the prayer to get the right sound.  But it was mostly the ESV version.


Liis
Administrator
September 10, 2016
I see you've used both "Mu" and "Mii" for "us" twice each. Is this a mistake or is there a particular reason you've done so?
by Liis
September 10, 2016
I see you've used both "Mu" and "Mii" for "us" twice each. Is this a mistake or is there a particular reason you've done so?

Ruvgein
September 10, 2016

Like above, I did that for sound. I thought it flowed better by using both.

by Ruvgein
September 10, 2016

Like above, I did that for sound. I thought it flowed better by using both.

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