As the description said, I tried to use the Translator here to translate The Dragonborn Comes into Dovahzul. I'm not exactly sure on if the words I had picked are correct, so I'm making this thread to try and get some help.

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Un hun, un hun, piraak kendovro ahkrin. Zu'u fun hi, zu'u fun hi, faal Dovahkiin bo

Vothzul kod suleyk do kruziik bron zun. Sahvot, sahvot, faal Dovahkiin bo

Oblaan wah vokul wah pah Keizaalro paal. Faas, faas, faal Dovahkiin bo

Fah vulom lost vod ahrk zoor nu wahl. Hi fen mindok, hi fen mindok, faal Dovahkiin bo.

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I tried to keep it to the original tune, as well as keeping it a little more simplified and to the original beat. If there's anything that could be changed about it, I'd love to know!

Now this is how everyone should use the Translator! Everything about it is correct and true to the character of draconic. For more clarity, I would probably switch dun 'grace/skill/finesse' for zun, and huzrah 'listen/heed' for faas.

If you wanted to keep the rhyming scheme in addition to the rhythm, you could steer further out with something like the following:

Rok dein silsekendov, rok morokei hun. Zu'u fun hi, zu'u fun hi, faal Dovahkiin bo.
Voth zul kolos suleyk do kruziik bron dun. Siiv ov, siiv ov, faal Dovahkiin bo.
Oblaan wah vokul, hokoron do Keizaal. Huzrah, huzrah, faal Dovahkiin bo.
Fah vulom los krent ahrk zoor unahzaal. Hi mindok, hi mindok, faal Dovahkiin bo.

Thank you for the input!! I did my best, and I'll be certain to use what you had suggested!

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