Drem Yol Lok, Zeymah. I've been looking at Nahkriin's name, how its' translation is "to slay in fury," and I think that "malice" can be translated similarly - "Munaxkriin" or "Felkriin", "to kill in cruelty" or "feral killing". What are your thoughts? If there was a suggestion like that before, pay no heed and move on.
A word for "malice" or "malicious intent"
Vuldunir October 15, 2019 |
Drem Yol Lok, Zeymah. I've been looking at Nahkriin's name, how its' translation is "to slay in fury," and I think that "malice" can be translated similarly - "Munaxkriin" or "Felkriin", "to kill in cruelty" or "feral killing". What are your thoughts? If there was a suggestion like that before, pay no heed and move on. |
Zinrahzul October 16, 2019 |
Just looking at the definition for malice - "the intention or desire to do evil; ill will" you can derive a way to say it in Dovahzul. "Intention" is "laan" (want), "frin" (zeal) or "smoliin" (passion). "Do evil" can be "vokul sod" (evil deed), "wah dreh vokul" (to do evil), or just "vokul" (evil). My suggestion is just laansevokul (want of evil). |
Just looking at the definition for malice - "the intention or desire to do evil; ill will" you can derive a way to say it in Dovahzul. "Intention" is "laan" (want), "frin" (zeal) or "smoliin" (passion). "Do evil" can be "vokul sod" (evil deed), "wah dreh vokul" (to do evil), or just "vokul" (evil).
My suggestion is just laansevokul (want of evil).
Vuldunir October 16, 2019 |
Zinrahzul I was thinking more towards malice being the desire to harm, not just do evil deeds. Although it does sound like something dov would say. |
ZinrahzulJust looking at the definition for malice - "the intention or desire to do evil; ill will" you can derive a way to say it in Dovahzul. "Intention" is "laan" (want), "frin" (zeal) or "smoliin" (passion). "Do evil" can be "vokul sod" (evil deed), "wah dreh vokul" (to do evil), or just "vokul" (evil).
My suggestion is just laansevokul (want of evil).
I was thinking more towards malice being the desire to harm, not just do evil deeds. Although it does sound like something dov would say.
Sonaak Kroinlah October 16, 2019 |
You could also use "nax" as a standalone substitute I think. It would all depend on context. |
You could also use "nax" as a standalone substitute I think. It would all depend on context.
Vuldunir October 16, 2019 |
Sonaak Kroinlah As in Paarthurnax Ambitios Cruel Ruler? Hmm, possible, and you are right about context. What if it's basic desire to hurt, almost feral... that's why I thought Fel would be a possible match too. |
Sonaak KroinlahYou could also use "nax" as a standalone substitute I think. It would all depend on context.
As in Paarthurnax Ambitios Cruel Ruler? Hmm, possible, and you are right about context. What if it's basic desire to hurt, almost feral... that's why I thought Fel would be a possible match too.
Sonaak Kroinlah October 17, 2019 |
You you give an example of sentences it would be used in? You don't have to just use one you could change depending on the intended meaning. |
You you give an example of sentences it would be used in? You don't have to just use one you could change depending on the intended meaning.
Zinrahzul October 18, 2019 |
Malice as desire to harm? Then you can use laan (want) along with ahraan (wound, to wound). "Rok laan ahraan zu'u". |
Malice as desire to harm? Then you can use laan (want) along with ahraan (wound, to wound). "Rok laan ahraan zu'u".
Vuldunir October 18, 2019 |
Zinrahzul That would just mean "I want to harm", wouldn't it? Whereas, similar to Nahkriin being "Vengeance", (Mu)Naxkriin or Felkriin "Malice". If it makes sense, at all.
Edit: Totally forgot there is Rii "Essence", "Spirit". So that would be Naxrii for "Malice"? |
ZinrahzulMalice as desire to harm? Then you can use laan (want) along with ahraan (wound, to wound). "Rok laan ahraan zu'u".
That would just mean "I want to harm", wouldn't it? Whereas, similar to Nahkriin being "Vengeance", (Mu)Naxkriin or Felkriin "Malice". If it makes sense, at all.
Edit: Totally forgot there is Rii "Essence", "Spirit". So that would be Naxrii for "Malice"?
Zinrahzul October 18, 2019 |
"I want to harm you" in this case does signify malice, but it's conveying it in word structure that it sounds like you don't want to use. Do you want to use the word in a sentence structure like "There is malice in his words"? If so, in Dovahzul you can use "Malice is found in his words" and then just plug in the words at the beginning to replace "malice" with the words you're trying to use. Nax conveys cruelty, which does share attributes with malice, but cruelty also implies power over that which is receiving the cruelty. Fel is ferocious, and just modifies whatever word you'd use for malice. The "-kriin" words you offered will always associate with "krii" (kill). Are you trying to describe malice as "desire to kill" or "desire to harm" ? |
"I want to harm you" in this case does signify malice, but it's conveying it in word structure that it sounds like you don't want to use. Do you want to use the word in a sentence structure like "There is malice in his words"? If so, in Dovahzul you can use "Malice is found in his words" and then just plug in the words at the beginning to replace "malice" with the words you're trying to use.
Nax conveys cruelty, which does share attributes with malice, but cruelty also implies power over that which is receiving the cruelty. Fel is ferocious, and just modifies whatever word you'd use for malice. The "-kriin" words you offered will always associate with "krii" (kill). Are you trying to describe malice as "desire to kill" or "desire to harm" ?
Vuldunir October 18, 2019 |
Zinrahzul I think Fel is more akin to "feral" and not "ferocious". Something basic, on a level of instinct - kill or be killed. If I was to put it in a sentence, it would be something like "Ok Rot Haalvut Do Naxrii. Ni Ov Ok Zul", "(I) Feel Malice in his words. Don't trust his Voice." I'm trying to describe malice as the capacity for evil, as if someone is on the brink of corruption, not necessarily the explicit desire to harm. |
Zinrahzul"I want to harm you" in this case does signify malice, but it's conveying it in word structure that it sounds like you don't want to use. Do you want to use the word in a sentence structure like "There is malice in his words"? If so, in Dovahzul you can use "Malice is found in his words" and then just plug in the words at the beginning to replace "malice" with the words you're trying to use.
Nax conveys cruelty, which does share attributes with malice, but cruelty also implies power over that which is receiving the cruelty. Fel is ferocious, and just modifies whatever word you'd use for malice. The "-kriin" words you offered will always associate with "krii" (kill). Are you trying to describe malice as "desire to kill" or "desire to harm" ?
I think Fel is more akin to "feral" and not "ferocious". Something basic, on a level of instinct - kill or be killed.
If I was to put it in a sentence, it would be something like "Ok Rot Haalvut Do Naxrii. Ni Ov Ok Zul", "(I) Feel Malice in his words. Don't trust his Voice."
I'm trying to describe malice as the capacity for evil, as if someone is on the brink of corruption, not necessarily the explicit desire to harm.
Zinrahzul October 18, 2019 |
Folaasi. Fel is definitely feral. I mispoke. Rii means nothing more than "essence". It doesn't add anything to the meaning of nax (cruelty). Using your words, "... do nax rii" essentially doesn't mean too much more than "... do nax". If you are describing malice as capacity for evil, then you're communicating that you realllly want to say "capacity for evil, as if someone is on the brink of corruption, not necessarily the explicit desire to harm". My previous posts were based upon your previous posts and my impression that you wanted to translate "desire to hurt". Now that we know what you're trying to translate, I think we might be on the same page. We can use key words to form the final group of words that will convey what we're looking for. Here are my associations with that malice description you gave: Capacity - the mind for, desire for, holds Evil - evil (vokul), cruelty (nax), On The Brink - near (vogut - un-far, het - here) Corruption - I can't think of anything else here besides "Evil" (refer to before)
(Side note) Since there's no direct Dovahzul word that means what English "malice" means, then we can't do a word-for-word translation. We must translate a more precise description of it. For example, when you said, "The capacity for evil...".
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Folaasi. Fel is definitely feral. I mispoke.
Rii means nothing more than "essence". It doesn't add anything to the meaning of nax (cruelty). Using your words, "... do nax rii" essentially doesn't mean too much more than "... do nax".
If you are describing malice as capacity for evil, then you're communicating that you realllly want to say "capacity for evil, as if someone is on the brink of corruption, not necessarily the explicit desire to harm". My previous posts were based upon your previous posts and my impression that you wanted to translate "desire to hurt".
Now that we know what you're trying to translate, I think we might be on the same page.
We can use key words to form the final group of words that will convey what we're looking for. Here are my associations with that malice description you gave:
Capacity - the mind for, desire for, holds
Evil - evil (vokul), cruelty (nax),
On The Brink - near (vogut - un-far, het - here)
Corruption - I can't think of anything else here besides "Evil" (refer to before)
(Side note)
Since there's no direct Dovahzul word that means what English "malice" means, then we can't do a word-for-word translation. We must translate a more precise description of it. For example, when you said, "The capacity for evil...".
Vuldunir October 18, 2019 |
Zinrahzul Nahkriin is not a direct translation, is it? "To Kill in Fury" or Vengeance. And yet it's two words Nah(fury) and Kriin(kill). Corruption is not evil, per se. Entropy, malignant transformation, if that makes sense. My attempt at creating a shout might help describe it: Ha Kreh Yol or "Mind Bending Fire". Just read my other thread, please. Evil as in Vokul, you say... Vokul Sil? Silnax? Viable choices, I'd suggest. Although only Silnax sounds like something a dovah would say. How about Hanax "Cruel Mind"? |
ZinrahzulFolaasi. Fel is definitely feral. I mispoke.
Rii means nothing more than "essence". It doesn't add anything to the meaning of nax (cruelty). Using your words, "... do nax rii" essentially doesn't mean too much more than "... do nax".
If you are describing malice as capacity for evil, then you're communicating that you realllly want to say "capacity for evil, as if someone is on the brink of corruption, not necessarily the explicit desire to harm". My previous posts were based upon your previous posts and my impression that you wanted to translate "desire to hurt".
Now that we know what you're trying to translate, I think we might be on the same page.
We can use key words to form the final group of words that will convey what we're looking for. Here are my associations with that malice description you gave:
Capacity - the mind for, desire for, holds
Evil - evil (vokul), cruelty (nax),
On The Brink - near (vogut - un-far, het - here)
Corruption - I can't think of anything else here besides "Evil" (refer to before)
(Side note)
Since there's no direct Dovahzul word that means what English "malice" means, then we can't do a word-for-word translation. We must translate a more precise description of it. For example, when you said, "The capacity for evil...".
Nahkriin is not a direct translation, is it? "To Kill in Fury" or Vengeance. And yet it's two words Nah(fury) and Kriin(kill).
Corruption is not evil, per se. Entropy, malignant transformation, if that makes sense. My attempt at creating a shout might help describe it: Ha Kreh Yol or "Mind Bending Fire". Just read my other thread, please.
Evil as in Vokul, you say... Vokul Sil? Silnax? Viable choices, I'd suggest. Although only Silnax sounds like something a dovah would say. How about Hanax "Cruel Mind"?
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