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An original Dovahzul poem by yours truly.

Frinmulaar
November 6, 2015

Because of the impending vocabulary overhaul, I have been challenging myself to think in canon. I only intended to learn the words, but alas, this thing somehow formed in my head and had to be let out. (It's in the same meter as Lovaas do Joorre because, frankly, I couldn't stop it.)

~~~

Daalsezin

1.
Drey lahney sahrot dovahthur
fod rahgol Keinserot
Joor danaan zul voth lingrah dur
ahrk sahlo meyro jot.

Voth zeymah frin, vahriin do uth
rok unt wah mindoraan
bok kolos wundun vensewuth
ahrk morah norok shaan.

2.
Rul lahvraan onikaan boziik
pah rotte drey motaad
Ond, vofun lot lost zahrahmiik
nuz sahvot lost unslaad.

Nust komeyt strun ol zeymahhe
drey Thu'um dwiirok pah ul
Nol tuz do kinzon hahdrimme
nivahzah rot bovul!

3.
Brit krongrah nau daar revak frod
aak orin ko un sul
Ahrk enook kiir do nonvul brod
niin werid voth pah zul.

Rul Tinvaak mah wah grind oblaan
vodahmaan rot kruziik
Ruz yol do rok wo lost balaan
fen drun faal laat saviik.

~~~

Feedback is welcome, as usual.

by Frinmulaar
November 6, 2015

Because of the impending vocabulary overhaul, I have been challenging myself to think in canon. I only intended to learn the words, but alas, this thing somehow formed in my head and had to be let out. (It's in the same meter as Lovaas do Joorre because, frankly, I couldn't stop it.)

~~~

Daalsezin

1.
Drey lahney sahrot dovahthur
fod rahgol Keinserot
Joor danaan zul voth lingrah dur
ahrk sahlo meyro jot.

Voth zeymah frin, vahriin do uth
rok unt wah mindoraan
bok kolos wundun vensewuth
ahrk morah norok shaan.

2.
Rul lahvraan onikaan boziik
pah rotte drey motaad
Ond, vofun lot lost zahrahmiik
nuz sahvot lost unslaad.

Nust komeyt strun ol zeymahhe
drey Thu'um dwiirok pah ul
Nol tuz do kinzon hahdrimme
nivahzah rot bovul!

3.
Brit krongrah nau daar revak frod
aak orin ko un sul
Ahrk enook kiir do nonvul brod
niin werid voth pah zul.

Rul Tinvaak mah wah grind oblaan
vodahmaan rot kruziik
Ruz yol do rok wo lost balaan
fen drun faal laat saviik.

~~~

Feedback is welcome, as usual.


paarthurnax
Administrator
November 6, 2015

This is great, Freymulaar, thanks for sharing! I love how you're not afraid to change up word order, and on top of all else, it rhymes. Definitely worth putting in the Library.

by paarthurnax
November 6, 2015

This is great, Freymulaar, thanks for sharing! I love how you're not afraid to change up word order, and on top of all else, it rhymes. Definitely worth putting in the Library.


Vokun ah
December 16, 2015

nice creativety and nice combination

by Vokun ah
December 16, 2015

nice creativety and nice combination


Vokun ah
December 16, 2015

could be better prounced but that is me

by Vokun ah
December 16, 2015

could be better prounced but that is me


Vulondovah21
December 17, 2015

Wow, these poems are well crafted. Thanks for continuing to write in the language, Freymulaar.

--Kogaan fah pruzah koraav ko mindoraan do rot.--

by Vulondovah21
December 17, 2015

Wow, these poems are well crafted. Thanks for continuing to write in the language, Freymulaar.

--Kogaan fah pruzah koraav ko mindoraan do rot.--


Vokun ah
December 19, 2015

i am amazed

by Vokun ah
December 19, 2015

i am amazed


BoziikDezAl
December 27, 2015
Wow, you should really write more.
by BoziikDezAl
December 27, 2015
Wow, you should really write more.

yolviingdinok
December 27, 2015

what is it in english?

by yolviingdinok
December 27, 2015

what is it in english?


Frinmulaar
December 27, 2015
yolviingdinok

what is it in english?

Here's a line-accurate translation.

1.
There once lived a mighty dragon overlord
when the War of Words raged.
Mortals had long been spoiling the Voice
with their foolish mouths.

With his brothers loyal and eager
he tried to understand
the age when old ways were followed
and fierce inspiration ruled.

2.
When they gathered wisdom boldly
all words did tremble
For the sacrifice was great
but the faith was unending.

They started the storm together,
their Thu'um carved all eternity
From the blades of sharp minds
all false words did flee.

3.
Their beautiful victory on that sacred field
still guides us to this day
and every child of the noble clan
praises them with all his voice.

When the Speech falls to meet its end
having forgotten the old words,
then the fire of the worthy one
will bring the last savior.

by Frinmulaar
December 27, 2015
yolviingdinok

what is it in english?

Here's a line-accurate translation.

1.
There once lived a mighty dragon overlord
when the War of Words raged.
Mortals had long been spoiling the Voice
with their foolish mouths.

With his brothers loyal and eager
he tried to understand
the age when old ways were followed
and fierce inspiration ruled.

2.
When they gathered wisdom boldly
all words did tremble
For the sacrifice was great
but the faith was unending.

They started the storm together,
their Thu'um carved all eternity
From the blades of sharp minds
all false words did flee.

3.
Their beautiful victory on that sacred field
still guides us to this day
and every child of the noble clan
praises them with all his voice.

When the Speech falls to meet its end
having forgotten the old words,
then the fire of the worthy one
will bring the last savior.


YolGoraagKaazah
December 27, 2015

Would it be alright if I were to use this for a RP?

by YolGoraagKaazah
December 27, 2015

Would it be alright if I were to use this for a RP?


DovahKiinZaan
December 27, 2015
Freymulaar for moderator.
by DovahKiinZaan
December 27, 2015
Freymulaar for moderator.

Frinmulaar
December 29, 2015
YolGoraagSingh

Would it be alright if I were to use this for a RP?

By all means you may. Just tell me the location of this RP, and mention or link me somewhere in it, please.

by Frinmulaar
December 29, 2015
YolGoraagSingh

Would it be alright if I were to use this for a RP?

By all means you may. Just tell me the location of this RP, and mention or link me somewhere in it, please.


Raxvulnax
December 29, 2015
This is pretty impressive. Kudos Freymulaar.
by Raxvulnax
December 29, 2015
This is pretty impressive. Kudos Freymulaar.

Raxvulnax
December 29, 2015
@DovahKiinZaan I agree
by Raxvulnax
December 29, 2015
@DovahKiinZaan I agree

dovah saviik
January 11, 2016

this is a great poem frey

by dovah saviik
January 11, 2016

this is a great poem frey

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